literature

Tired

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I am tired, heavy-footed, worn with wear I wear my hair
down long
Cold air blows through windows trying to nip the buds
long gone
I watch the cigarette smoke whip through the air currents
blue-grey
Saddened by the sun's insistence, shining on a day like
this day

I am rust, I am crushed metal, junkyard darkness, graveyard
sunset
I can't remember when I remembered what I'm trying so hard
to forget
Fire in oil drums replace the sun and the screaming and singing's
begun
I can't sing anymore, like Clancy can't, and the noise in my head's a
throb-thrum
Jesus, why can't I just sleep?
(Snow becomes a warm blanket if you lie in it long enough.)
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m0thr4's avatar
reading this at 7 AM, not having slept yet (ugh).

that first line, the bit that goes " . . . worn with wear I wear my hair" just had me; had to read and reread.
love the alliteration and homophones and repeated rhymes, and how the rhythm feels so natural.
will definitely be back to read more--after a good long rest so I can pay attention. :love: