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Stars

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Literature Text

Fat and fuzzy stars tonight, baby blue comfort
Singing lullabies, soothing through the cold clear night
Promises of spring;
Windowpane lookers, abandon your sorrow
Wide-eyed children, believe that tomorrow
Unseen, the stars
The stars still sing
I'm way out of my comfort zone here. I wanted to write something hopeful... I've re-written it twenty times over the last few days. Help! Is it worth it, or just tired old cliches?
© 2012 - 2024 Bark
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Phan5everx2's avatar
Wow. I liked it but I expected a lot of hate, idk people usually like depressing or confusing stuff. People on deviantart are a lot nicer than people on YouTube and tumblr and stuff.