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Five AM

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Pre-dawn darkness again, seething, quiet
A monster hugging the city
How heavy, how suffocating it is
The clock has run down on time for dreaming
A void between night and morning
Ready to swallow everything up
A time for old men's reflections
On love, and loss, and sorrow
Oppressive black sky, you eat everything
But the all-night diner
Where lonely old men sit
Drinking coffee at five AM
Not talking
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AElfrics-Cat's avatar
Absolutely beautiful.  Love the sweeping feel of this.  And yes, so very much encapsulating that 5am feeling.